I think that the image is interesting but I’m not sure that it really communicates your narrative. Is one half the aunt and the other the mother? You need to make more of the aunt’s obsession with the girl. I really like the picture of the aunt and I think that you should try layering a close up shot of the aunt over a long shot of the niece. You need to give the idea of her being a presence in the girls life. The girl could be playing in the picture or holding a teddy etc. It definitely conveys the genre but you need to give a little more thought to the narrative.
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